(2021•安徽)假定你是李华，曾用攒下来的零花钱做了一件有意义的事并受到家人表扬。请你用英语写一篇短文向校英文报投稿。内容包括:

1.事情经过；

2.个人感悟。

注意:

1.词数80~ 100；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；

4.短文题目已给出，不计入总词数。

参考词汇: 

pocket money (n.零花钱); 

meaningful (adj.有意义的)

Once I Was Praised

...                                                           

写作思路

Role	Audience	Format	Topic
李华“我” (确定人称)	校英文报 (确定读者)	投稿 (确定体裁)	“我”曾用攒下来的零花钱做了一件有意义的事并受到家人表扬(确定时态、内容要点、语言风格)

1.文体:本题要求写一篇短文向校英文报投稿,属于应用文写作。

2.人称:以第一人称来行文。

3.时态:介绍个人情况,以一般过去时为主。

4.注意事项:

要求以“Once I Was Praised”为题，结合提示进行写作，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。

作文可分为三段，第一段引出话题；第二段介绍事情经过；第三段描述个人感悟。

要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。

 

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Once I Was Praised

Once I was praised because I did something meaningful with my pocket money.

One day, I happened to know some students in a school were hungry for knowledge but they didn’t have enough books. I decided to offer my help. With all the pocket money I saved, I bought some books online, and gave them away to the school. My parents were very happy and praised me when they heard about it. They said I did a meaningful thing.

I believe that every little bit helps. I will continue to do what I can to help others.

 

(2020•安徽)假定你是李华。某英文报“My Hometown”专栏面向中学生招募小记者,请你用英文给报社写封自荐信。要点如下: 

1.熟悉家乡;

2.乐于交流;

3.擅长英语。

注意:1.词数80~100;

2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;

3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;

4.信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。

参考词汇:journalist(n.记者);column(n.专栏)

Dear Sir/Madam,

... 

Yours,

Li Hua

写作思路

1.文体:本题要求写一封自荐信,属于应用文写作。

2.人称:自荐信应以第一人称为主。

3.时态:介绍个人情况,主要用一般现在时。

4.注意事项:

(1)写作内容必须包含所给的三个要点,不能遗漏,且要适当拓展细节;

(2)因为是自荐信,所以语言要得体,语气要合理;

(3)写作时要适当运用过渡连接词,使文章行文连贯,过渡自然。

写作提纲

 

 

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Dear Sir/Madam,

I hear your newspaper needs journalists for the column My Hometown. I hope to be a member of the team.

①First,I know a lot about my hometown,such as its history and culture.②Besides,I used to work as a journalist for my school newspaper and I did a very good job.③I’m easy⁃going and always ready to communicate with others.④Moreover,I have a good knowledge of English,and I’m skillful at expressing myself clearly in English.

⑤I’m sure to be the right person you are looking for.I’d be thankful if I could get this chance.

Yours,

Li Hua

范文点评

①such as“例如”,用来举例。

②used to do sth.“过去常常做某事”;work as“担任”。

③easy⁃going“易相处的”;communicate with“与……交流”。

④have a good knowledge of“通晓;对……熟悉”;be skillful at...“擅长……”。

⑤you are looking for为省略了引导词that的定语从句,修饰先行词the right person。

 

（2019•安徽）假定你是李华,你的英国笔友Mike最近因视力减退而感到不安,请你用英文给他写封电子邮件,谈谈你在保护视力方面的一些做法。要点如下:

1.经常做户外活动;

2.很少用电子产品;

3.坚持做眼保健操;

4.……

注意:1.词数80~100;

2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;

3.文中不能出现与本人相关的信息;

4.开头和结尾已为你写好,不计人总词数。

Dear Mike,

I’m sorry to learn that your eyesight is getting weaker.  

... 

Yours,

Li Hua

 

写作思路

Role	Audience	Format	Topic
李华“我” (确定人称)	Mike (确定读者)	电子邮件 (确定体裁)	“我”在保护视力方面的一些做法(确定时态、内容要点、语言风格)

由于审题问题,很多考生会误将本文写成给Mike的建议。

 

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Dear Mike,

I’m sorry to learn that your eyesight is getting weaker.I’d like to share with you some ways of protecting eyesight in my daily life.

At school,I often go out of the classroom to play with my classmates or do physical exercise during the breaks.In my free time,I also try hard to avoid using the mobile phone or computer.You know,the light they give off is harmful to our eyes.Besides,doing eye exercises plays an important role in relaxing my tired eyes.Lastly,I usually have my eyes examined every term to make sure my eyes stay healthy.

I hope you’ll find my ways helpful.

Yours,

Li Hua

 

(2018•安徽)某英文杂志社正面向九年级毕业生征文,请从以下要点中选择一至两个方面,并结合具体事例,用英语写一篇题为“Thank You,My Teacher!”的短文参加此次活动。要点如下:

1.严格要求;

2.耐心指导;

3.热情鼓励;

4.……

注意:1.词数80~100;

2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;

3.文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称。

 

写作思路

Role	Audience	Format	Topic
九年级毕业生“我”(确定人称)	杂志社的读者,包括要感谢的老师(确定读者)	征文 (确定体裁及形式)	表达对老师的感谢(确定时态及要点——一到两个具体事例)

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Thank You,My Teacher!

I’d like to say thanks to my English teacher,Miss Li,because she’s helped me a lot.

Once,I failed my English exam.When she found I was very worried,she encouraged me to study harder and promised to help me.After that,I turned to her for help every time I had questions.She was always patient to make me understand every single question.With her help,I’ve had enough courage to face difficulties and made much progress in English.

Thank you,my dear teacher!The love and support from you will be with me forever.

本文以九年级的毕业生“我”的口吻进行写作,将Miss Li的人称设定为第三人称单数she。

 

 

(2017•安徽)假如你是李华,你们学校将举行“弘扬中华传统文化——戏曲进校园”展演活动,你打算邀请你的美国朋友Mike参加。请你根据以下提示用英文给他写一封电子邮件。

1.时间:7月1日下午2点;

2.地点:学校操场;

3.内容:文化展览、节目表演等。

提示词:戏曲opera n.表演performance n.

注意:1.词数80~100;

2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;

3.信中不能出现与本人相关的信息;

4.开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。

Dear Mike,

I know you are interested in Chinese traditional culture. 

...

Yours,

Li Hua

 

写作思路

1.文体:本文属于应用文中的电子邮件。

2.人称:介绍学校举办的活动,以第三人称为主。

3.时态:介绍即将举办的学校活动,以一般将来时为主。

4.注意事项:

(1)要围绕所给的要点将活动的情况介绍清楚,特别是要突出活动的主题“弘扬中华传统文化——戏曲进校园”;

(2)注意词数的限制,要在合理的范围内,不能超出规定词数范围过多。

写作提纲

 

 

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Dear Mike,

I know you are interested in Chinese traditional culture.

Now,I have a piece of good news to share with you.①There is an activity about Chinese traditional operas at 2:00 p.m.on July 1st.It will be held on the playground in our school and all the teachers and students will attend.②On that day,a culture show and many wonderful opera performances will be put on.③It’s a chance for you to learn more about Chinese traditional culture.Come and join us!④I think we’ll have a great time!

⑤I’m looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

范文点评

①There be句型“某地/时有某物/人”。

②put on“上演;举办;展出”。

③It’s a chance for sb.to do sth.“对某人来说是做某事的机会”。

④have a great time“玩得开心”（源自给力英语公众号）。

⑤look forward to“期盼;盼望”。

 

(2016•安徽)假定你是李华,你的美国朋友Jack来信,说他暑假期间要来中国交流学习。他学了两年中文,但是仍然担心用中文交流时会遇到困难。请你用英语给Jack写封回信,提几点建议,要点如下:

1.大胆自信;

2.放慢语速;

3.借助图画或肢体语言等表达方式。

注意:1.词数80~100;

2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;

3.信中不能出现与本人相关的信息;

4.开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。

参考词汇:自信的 confident　肢体语言 body language

Dear Jack,

How is everything going?I am very glad to learn that you are coming to China this summer.

...                                                            

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

 

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Dear Jack,

How is everything going?I am very glad to learn that you are coming to China this summer.It’s not necessary to worry about your Chinese.I’d like to share my ideas,which I think might help.

First,be brave enough to speak Chinese when you communicate with others.It’s of great importance to be confident about yourself.We Chinese are very friendly so you needn’t be afraid of making any mistakes.Second,it’s better to speak slowly and clearly.In this way you can make yourself understood more easily.What’s more,sometimes you can use drawings or pictures,and as you know,body language is also widely used across cultures and very often it really works.

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

 

(2015•安徽)假定你是李华,你的英国笔友Peter来信询问汉语中一些流行的网络语言的意思,请根据下列提示回一封电子邮件。

●点赞(Dianzan):赞同、喜爱

●任性(Renxing):随心所欲

●秒杀(Miaosha):快速达到目的

●土豪(Tuhao):很富有

●……

注意:1.词数80~100;

2.请不要逐句翻译,可适当发挥;

3.文中不能出现真实的校名和人名;

4.邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。

Dear Peter,

As the Internet is developing fast,more and more new words and phrases have been created in Chinese.Here are some examples.    

...

All the best!

Yours,

Li Hua

写作思路

1.文体:本文要求写一封电子邮件,属于应用文写作。

2.人称:写邮件向对方科普知识,应以第二人称为主。

3.时态:介绍网络语言知识,以一般现在时为主。

4.注意事项:

(1)注意包含所给要点提示,并根据给出的开头和结尾安排好文章结构;

(2)举例说明时,注意使用不同的句式结构,如长句和短句、简单句和复合句交替使用等,以避免语言枯燥、乏味;

(3)恰当使用连接词,使文章条理清晰。

 

写作提纲

 

 

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Dear Peter,

As the Internet is developing fast,more and more new words and phrases have been created in Chinese.Here are some examples.

①One of the most popular words is Dianzan,which is often used when you quite agree with someone.Another example is Renxing.②When you say somebody is Renxing,you mean that they will do whatever they like.③The phrase Miaosha first came from online shopping,which means you can complete your shopping orders before others.④But now it’s widely used when you achieve your purpose in a very short time.⑤If you describe somebody as a Tuhao,you mean that he is very rich.

You can find lots of such new Chinese words.⑥Keep learning,and you’ll know more about our language and culture.

All the best!

Yours,

Li Hua

 

范文点评

①which引导非限制性定语从句;when引导时间状语从句;agree with sb.“同意某人”。

②when引导时间状语从句;whatever引导宾语从句。

③come from“来自……”;online shopping“网上购物”。

④achieve one’s purpose“实现某人的目标”。

⑤if引导条件状语从句;describe...as...“将……描述为……”。

⑥固定句型“祈使句+and+陈述句”;know about“知道;了解”。

 

(2014•安徽)假定你是王伟,你的英国笔友David来信问及你们学校在暑假期间对学生的要求。请你根据以下要点给他回一封电子邮件。

●家庭安全:小心用火用电,外出时关好门窗;

●游泳安全:不独自去游泳,不去河、湖游泳;

●交通安全:过马路要当心,不在马路上玩耍。

提示词:electricity(n.电)

注意:1.词数80~100;

2.请不要逐句翻译,可适当发挥;

3.文中不能出现真实的校名和人名;

4.邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。

Send	From: Wang Wei To: David Subject: Safety Rules for the Summer Holiday
Dear David, Glad to receive your e⁃mail.Our school has made many safety rules for us to follow.Let me tell you something about them. ... I think these rules are necessary as safety comes first. Have a good summer holiday! Yours, Wang Wei

 

写作思路

 

1.文体:本文要求写一封电子邮件,属于应用文写作。

2.人称:以第一人称为主,兼顾第三人称。

3.时态:介绍学校在暑假期间对学生的要求,以一般现在时为主。

4.注意事项:

(1)考生不能直接翻译要点,需要根据自己的理解适当拓展内容;

(2)语言表达要准确,尽量用自己熟悉的词汇和句型;

(3)要适当运用过渡连接词将要点连接起来,使文章衔接紧密。

 写作提纲

  

 

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Dear David,

Glad to receive your e⁃mail.Our school has made many safety rules for us to follow.Let me tell you something about them.

①We are asked to be careful with electricity when we are using it.②It is dangerous to play with fire,for it may cause terrible accidents.③We should make sure doors and windows are shut before we leave.④Besides,we are not allowed to swim alone,especially in deep rivers or lakes.⑤If we really want to,we must go to the swimming pool with our parents or teachers.What’s more,following traffic rules is also very important.⑥Everyone should watch out when crossing the road.⑦And our school warns us not to play on the road.

I think these rules are necessary as safety comes first.

Have a good summer holiday!

Yours,

Wang Wei

 

范文点评

①be careful with...“对……小心;对……谨慎”;when引导时间状语从句。

②It’s +adj.(+for sb.)+ to do sth.“(对某人来说)做某事是……的”;for引导并列句,表原因。

③make sure+(that)从句“确保……”。

④be (not) allowed to do sth.“(不)被允许做某事”。

⑤if引导条件状语从句（源自给力英语公众号）。

⑥watch out“小心”。

⑦warn sb.(not) to do sth.“提醒某人(不要)做某事”。

 

(2013•安徽)今天是父亲节。假定你是李华,请给你的美国朋友John写一封电子邮件,谈谈你将如何与父亲一起度过这个特别的日子。要点如下:

●表述你与父亲间的情感;

●为父亲制作一张卡片;

●帮助父亲做点事;

●陪父亲散步等。

注意:1.词数80~100;

2.请不要逐句翻译,可适当发挥;

3.邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。

Dear John,

It’s Father’s Day today.It’s a special day,isn’t it?  

...

What’s your plan for Father’s Day?I’m looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours,

Li Hua

 

写作思路

1.文体:本文要求写一封电子邮件,属于应用文写作。

2.人称:文章主要介绍自己如何与父亲一起度过父亲节,应以第一人称和第三人称为主。

3.时态:介绍未来的计划与安排,应以一般将来时为主。

4.注意事项:

(1)本篇书面表达的主题是父亲节的计划和安排,要围绕此主题展开;

(2)涵盖所给出的四个要点,可适当拓展,详略要得当;

(3)适当表达对父亲的感情。

写作提纲

 

 

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Dear John,

It’s Father’s Day today.It’s a special day,isn’t it?

①I think we should do something to show our love for our fathers on this special day.My father and I are good friends.②Whenever I meet with difficulties,he is always there,ready to help me.

③Today I will make a beautiful card for him,with my thanks and best wishes on it.④Then I will help him wash the car this afternoon and cook his favorite food in the evening.⑤Besides,I’ll take a walk with him after dinner and then play chess with him,for he likes it very much.I’m sure he’ll be very happy.

What’s your plan for Father’s Day?I’m looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours,

Li Hua

 

范文点评

①to show...为动词不定式作目的状语。

②whenever引导让步状语从句;be ready to help sb.“乐于帮助某人”。

③“with+名词+介词短语”作伴随状语。

④help sb.do sth.“帮助某人做某事”。

⑤take a walk“散步”;for连接两个并列句,表示原因。

 

(2012•安徽)英语课堂上,老师要求学生就“与人相处”的话题展开小组讨论。请根据以下你所在小组的讨论结果,以“How to Get On Well with Others”为题,写一篇英语短文。

Suggestions	●learn to share ●respect(尊重) others ●communicate with each other ●...
My suggestion	...

注意:1.词数80~100;

2.可适当发挥,以使行文连贯;

3.文中请勿提及你的真实姓名和学校。

How to Get On Well with Others

... 

 

写作思路

1.文体:本文主要是提出建议,为说明文写作。

2.人称:文章内容主要为提建议,应以第一人称为主。

3.时态:针对如何“与人相处”给出建议,应以一般现在时为主。

4.注意事项:

(1)在原来所给要点的基础上适当发挥,且要给出自己的观点;

(2)思路要清晰明了,不能混乱,逻辑要合理。

写作提纲 

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How to Get On Well with Others

①As we know,students should learn how to get on well with others.But in what ways?First of all,we should respect others.Everybody has their own way to do things,so we should understand each other.②Besides,it is important for us to communicate with each other and share our happiness and sadness.③What’s more,we should be kind to others and offer necessary help to those who are in trouble.

In my opinion,we should treat others in an honest way.④Only in these ways can we get along well.

范文点评

①as we know“正如我们所知道的那样”。

②it is+adj.+for sb.to do sth.“做某事对某人来说是……的”。

③offer sth.to sb.“主动向某人提供某物”;be in trouble“处于困境”;who 引导定语从句。

④only修饰介词短语放在句首,句子采用部分倒装。

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