写作练习的技巧就是学会别人的优秀表达,书信作文的一些常见思路和结构大家需要多阅读、多了解,还有在三大结构基础上的写作“套话”也需要大家及时掌握。牢记是思考和提高的基础,下面就开始拼记忆力马下来逐句背诵吧!
How is life treating you?
I am LiHua, a 17-year-old boy currently studying in XXX middle school.
As the vice monitor of our class, I ...
I read in your newspaper/ micro-blog /website that...
You said in your last letter that...
Now, I am writing to do sth.
Now, I am writing this letter to do sth.
Now, I am writing these few lines to do sth.
Now, I am writing to apply for the job/position.
Now, I am writing to show/ express my heartfelt gratitude to you.
Now, I am writing to invite you to join the....(as our guest/ judge/ instructor).
Now, I am writing to give you a hand.
Now, I am writing to ask you to give me a hand/ do me a favor.
Now, I am writing to show/ express my heartfelt apology to you.
2.中间段:具体问题(主题句)+具体分析(拓展句)
There are four main reasons why I am fit for the position/job. To begin with, ... Moreover,... What's more,... Finally,...
I have three main advantages. First and foremost,...Additonally,...Last but not least,...
I have the confidence that I can handle the job. Firstly,... Secondly,...Thirdly,...
When I (看照片、看录像、看那段时间的日记、回忆那段经历), I just can't help thinking of you/ what you have done for me. It was so kind of you to (对方做的第一件事). Besides, you(对方做的第二件事), which really surprised me. Actually, I shall always remember (对方做的第三件事), considering that,(第三件事情的意义). Nothing will be able to erase our wonderful memories, and I will cherish them forever.
邀请信:描述具体的活动内容,如活动主题、意义、地点、时间、参加者和其它事项。
Here are some details for the activities. To begin with, (活动主题或活动目的,如:the theme of the contest is "human and the nature", which is undoubtedly not only entertaining but also instructive. )Moreover, (活动的地点和时间,如it will be in room 501 from 2:00 to5:00 on the afternoon of June 15th.) What's more,(活动人员,如:ten outstanding competitors will take part in the contest.)Finally, (其他信息,
如:if you need any further information, please call me at 44876655. )
There are several simple suggestions for you. To begin with, ... Moreover,... What's more,... Finally,...
Immediate and effective practice must be put into practice. First and foremost,...Additonally,...Last but not least,...
The following suggestions carried out, things would probably become much better. Firstly,... Secondly,...Thirdly,...
I wish you would be so kind as to give me some suggestions/help on the following problems. To begin with,(困难一),which has annoyed me for quite a long time. Moreover,(困难二), for personally I lack the very basic experience on this matter.Finally,...
1、I have trouble in doing sth.
2、I find it extremely hard for me to do sth.
3、Doing sth is another terrible headache for me.
1、与人相处 get along well with my classmates/ the new teacher / my parents.(和我的同学/新老师/父母相处)
2、把握时间 arrange and make good use of my everyday time for valuable things. (安排和利用每天的时间去做有意义的事情)
3、明确目标 know the purpose of my life and the destination of my future in order to passionately live a purpose-driven life everyday. (知道我生命的目的和未来的目标,以便每天充满激情地过着“目标驱动”的生活)
have trouble in mastering the advanced grammar rules and put them into use in my speaking and writing. (觉得掌握高级语法并应用于口语和写作很难。)
find myself making progress not as fast as before, which has been annoying me for a long time.(典型的好孩子啊!发现自己进步没有以前快了,感到很苦恼...情商的体现!)
3、精力有限 can't be passionate and energetic all day long so as to make every moment meaningful and splendid. (没法儿一天到晚精力充沛以便把每个瞬间都过得精彩和有意义——这句话绝对会让老师对你肃然起敬...)
道歉信:描述不能或没能做到某事(如:赴约、还书、提供某种帮助)的原因
【示例1】因不能按期还书而道歉——因为被我表妹强行借走了
How is everything going? I am writing to beg your pardon for my long delaying in returning to you your “Gone with the Wind” which I read through with great interest.
I had already finished reading the book and was about to return it when my cousin came to see me. Never having seen the book, She was so interested in it that I had no choice but to allow her finish the book. I hope that in view of the additional delight thus afforded by your book, you will overlook my negligence(疏忽)in not returning it sooner. (然而,看在你的那本书能够带来的双倍喜悦的面子上,希望你能够原谅我没有及早还书的错误)
I sincerely hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation. Thanking you again for the loan.
注:除了道歉信中间段落需要写成记叙形式,其余五种书信都应该写成议论形式。不管是记叙还是议论,中间段落第一句都应该写一个概括性质的“主题句”——这是我们的原则!
Hopefully the chance would be offered to me. If chosen/elected, I would dedicate all my energy and wisdom to the company/activity/club/class. Thank you for reading my letter/ listening to my speech in such a hot summer. Looking forward do your reply at your earliest convenience./ I won't let you down.(我不会让你们失望)
注:在这个段落模板中,我们融合了自荐信结尾段和竞选演讲结尾段两个段落,两种结尾段都需要四个句子。
I, on behalf of my whole family/class/school, would like to thank you again for what you have done for me/us. May you be blessed in everything you do.
我代表我的全家再次向你所做的一切向你表达感谢。祝你万事如意!
We are sincerely looking forward to your coming. My schoolmates/family and I would feel much honored if you could make it. I would like to meet you at the school gate and please drop me a line or give me a call to let me know your decision soon.Thank you.
我们衷心期望您能大驾光临。如果您能来,同学们和我将非常的荣幸。我会在校门口迎接您,请回信或打电话告诉我您的决定。谢谢。
Hopefully these suggestions will be of great help to you. If there is anything else I can do for you, please let me know as soon as possible. I'm sure you can solve your problembefore long.
Hopefully your kind and timely help would be offered to me.Looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.
Hopefully you would accept my sincere apologize.
注:六种书信最后的结尾都是:Best wishes, / Yours truely, /XXX