Module 8

 

写作要求

本模块以“事故”为话题,涉及交通事故、毒蛇伤人等内容。在具体的写作中,学生应做到以下几点:

1.能清楚地描述过去发生的事故;

2.能用过去进行时生动描述事故的过程;

3.能灵活使用when,while,as引导的时间状语从句,给文章增添色彩。

 

写作积累

【常用句型】

While the lights were changing to red,a car suddenly appeared.

I was waiting to cross the road.

And the driver was talking on his mobile phone.

So when you’re on your bike,think about the risk of an accident!

Don’t ride side by side with your friends.

I was walking along the street when the accident happened.

He didn’t pay attention to the car opposite.

Don’t use your mobile phone when you are driving.

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【典型例题】

请根据以下提示,以“Keep safe in the street”为题,写一篇英语短文。先简单描述一下事故发生的经过,再给其他骑车上学的同学提供两条安全建议。

提示:今天早上,在你骑车上学的路上,一辆公交车正停在站牌处。由于你在听音乐,没有注意到,所以你没能及时刹车,撞到了公交车的后部并从自行车上摔了下来。幸运的是,你伤得不重,并且有一位路过的同学帮助了你。

【审题思路】

1.审人称:文章主要涉及介绍“我”上学路上发生事故的经过以及提供建议,主体是“我”,故用第一人称。

2.审时态:文章主要介绍过去发生的事件,并对事件的经过进行简要描述,故用一般过去时和过去进行时。

3.注意事项:

( 1 )注意正确运用过去进行时和一般过去时。

( 2 )叙述事件时,前后往往要用提示性的语句使文章过渡自然,如this morning,one day等表示时间的时间状语。

( 3 )当两个动作同时发生时,可用when,while,as soon as等连接。

【写作提纲】

1.按时间顺序描述事故的经过:This morning,I rode...At that time,I was listening to...

2.提供两条安全建议:when...don’t ride too fast,don’t...And we had better...

【优秀范文】

Keep safe in the street

This morning,I rode a bike on my way to school.A bus stopped at the bus stop.At that time,I was listening to music,so I couldn’t be in time to put on the brake.I hit the back of the bus and fell off my bike.Luckily,I wasn’t badly hurt and a kind student helped me.I’m very sorry for that.I didn’t think about the risk of an accident.So when we’re on our bikes,don’t ride too fast,don’t ride side by side with friends and don’t use our mobile phones.And we had better not listen to music.We must keep safe in the street.

实战演练

学校英语报刊正在举办“Things around you”的主题征文活动。请你根据以下提示写一篇80词左右的英语短文,向学校英语报刊投稿。

提示:1.几个男孩在街上踢足球;

2.一位老人提着篮子经过,被飞来的足球击中,老人的篮子掉落在地;

3.孩子们向老人认错。老人原谅了他们,并嘱咐他们不要在街上踢足球。

One day,a few boys were playing football in the street.They had a good time.Suddenly an old man who had a basket in his hand was passing by.The ball hit him.His basket fell to the ground.The boys stopped playing and ran over to the old man.They said “Sorry! Sorry!” The old man told them not to play football in the street any more.The boys said they would never play football in the street again and they helped the old man to carry the basket.

Module 9

 

写作要求

本模块的话题是“人口”。学生可以根据当前的社会发展状况,谈论人口增长及其带来的问题,并提出相应的建议。在具体的写作中,学生应做到以下几点:

1.能用“billion,million,thousand”等数词表达人口的数量;

2.能用“there be,it is clear that...”等句型表达人口增长及其带来的问题;

3.能用“we should/had better...”等句式对人口增长、环境保护等相关问题提出合理的建议。

 

写作积累

【常用句型】

Beijing is a huge city with a big population.

Population increase is a big problem in many countries.

That causes a lot of problems,such as too much traffic and noise.

It takes an hour to get there by bus.

It is clear that Arnwick needs more schools.

That’s almost one fifth of the world’s population.

 

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假如你是李华,你的美国笔友Tom给你发来电子邮件,询问你所在城市存在的问题。请你根据下面的提示信息给他回复邮件,并给出解决这些问题的方法。

提示:1.车辆太多导致空气污染严重;

2.许多人来到城市找工作造成城市拥挤,没有足够的学校和医院。

【审题思路】

1.审人称:文章主要介绍城市存在的问题,主体为城市,故用第三人称。

2.审时态:文章主要介绍城市存在的问题以及解决问题的方法,故以一般现在时为主。

3.注意事项:

( 1 )文章以应用文为框架,说明文为主体,因此要注意写作格式;

( 2 )列举城市存在的问题以及提出解决问题的方法时,可用表示顺序的词汇衔接。

【写作提纲】

1.开篇点题:There are some problems in my city.

2.介绍具体的问题:First,there is too much air pollution because of...Second...

3.解决方法:I think the government...

4.美好心愿:I believe...

【优秀范文】

Dear Tom,

There are some problems in my city.First,there’s too much air pollution because of too much traffic.Second,because many people come to the city to look for jobs,it becomes very crowded.And the city doesn’t have enough schools or hospitals.

I think the government should do something to solve the problems.First,it should offer enough buses so that we won’t use cars so often.Then there will be more fresh air.Next,it should build more schools and hospitals.

I believe as long as we try our best,everything will be better and better.

Yours,

Li Hua

 

实战演练

我国是世界上人口最多的国家。请你根据下面的提示,写一篇英语短文,谈谈你对人口问题的认识。

提示:1.大量的人口使家庭居住面积大量减少;

2.人口问题使能源和水短缺、城市拥挤、交通压力大;

3.谈谈你自己的感想。

注意:1.词数80左右;

2.请不要逐句翻译,可以适当发挥;

3.文中不能出现真实的校名和人名。

China has the largest population in the world.Because of the large population,there is less living space for each family.And it’s difficult for lots of people to find jobs.The large population also causes many other difficulties for the whole nation.For example,we are short of energy and water.Most cities are more crowded than before,and the traffic is much heavier.The large population has become a serious problem.　

The population problem in China is really serious,so I think the government should find out more ways to solve it.I believe we can make it.

Module 10

 

写作要求

本模块以“天气”为话题,学生可以根据天气情况,向他人介绍去某地旅游的最佳时机。在具体的写作中,学生应做到以下几点:

1.能描述一般状态下的天气情况;

2.能用“Maybe it will.../ It may.../It will probably.../It might...”等句型描述天气;

3.能根据天气情况,用祈使句或其他建议类的句式,对人们的穿着、活动及旅游等提出合理的建议。

 

写作积累

【常用句型】

You can go to Hainan Island if you like sunny weather.

Not usually,although this year it snowed quite a lot.

The weather gets cooler,and the leaves start to turn gold,then brown.

If you want to visit Alaska,you had better go in summer.

The best time to visit my home town is in September.

It/The weather is always cool and sunny.

You don’t need to/needn’t take an umbrella all the time.

You can enjoy...

 

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【典型例题】

假如你是李华,你的美国笔友Mike想来你的家乡旅游,但是他不知道什么时候来最合适。请你给他写一封电子邮件,提一些建议并说明理由。

【审题思路】

1.审人称:文章介绍家乡时,主要涉及天气、景点等,故以第三人称为主。

2.审时态:文章主要叙述一般性事实情况,故以一般现在时为主。

3.注意事项:

( 1 )文章以应用文为框架,说明文为主体;

( 2 )有针对性的介绍一些可游览的景点及需要带的物品;

( 3 )正确运用连词以更好地衔接上下文。

【写作提纲】

1.开篇给出建议:The best time to visit my home town is in September.

2.说明理由:because the weather is very fine...

3.发出邀请:Welcome to my home town!

【优秀范文】

Dear Mike,

The best time to visit my home town is in September,because the weather is very fine in this month.It’s always cool and sunny,so walking is the best way to visit my home town.It doesn’t rain often,so you don’t need to take an umbrella all the time.You can taste all kinds of fruit if you come in September.The fruit is very delicious,but it’s not expensive.

Welcome to my home town!

Yours,

Li Hua

 

实战演练

假如你是李良,你的英国笔友Nick来信说要参观你的家乡。请根据要点提示,给他写一封80词左右的英语回信。开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数。

提示:1.你的家乡在山东东南部;

2.春天是来这儿的最佳时间;

3.白天天气温暖、干燥、多风,夜间有点凉;

4.最有趣的事情是在田野里放风筝;

5.你的期望和祝愿。

Dear Nick,

I’m glad to hear that you will come to my home town.Let me tell you something about it.It is a small town in the southeast of Shandong.The best time to visit here is in spring.The weather is warm,dry and windy.But sometimes it’s a bit cool at night,so remember to bring some warm clothes.The most interesting thing here is to fly kites in the field.　

I wish you to visit my home town soon.I’m sure you will have a good time here.　

Yours,

Li Liang

 

 

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