高考英语作文评分标准中的最高档次——第五档（21-25分）要求考生“应用较多的语法结构”。想要高考英语作文“亮”起来，考生要善于灵活运用多样句式，如名词性从句、定语从句、状语从句、非谓语动词、强调句、倒装句等，使句子变得更优美，增加文章的表达力度，从而提高文章的档次。笔者精心整理了近几年高考英语作文范文中出现的一些高级句式并改编成练习，希望对同学们的英语写作有启发和帮助。

一、下列句子使用了哪种高级结构？

1.（2016·浙江高考）I know how I achieved my success.

2.（2016·全国卷Ⅱ）Any student who is interested is welcome to participate.

3.（2017·北京高考）That’s why I think the trip along the Yangtze will be a better choice.

4.（2014·辽宁高考）Whoever is interested in making small inventions can join in it.

5.（2016·全国卷Ⅲ）If it’s convenient for you, let’s meet at 8:30 outside the school gate.

6.（2017·全国卷Ⅰ）Knowing the history of the Tang Dynasty will be of great benefit for you to understand the background of the poems.

7.（2012·福建）Only in this way can we live in more comfortable and beautiful surroundings.

8.（2015·南宁二模）It is the course that makes our lives more colorful.

9.（2013·江西高考）What a wonderful time!

10.（2015·全国卷Ⅰ）It carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries.  

 

二、请按要求改写或翻译下列句子。

方法一： 使用复合句（名从、定从、状从）使句子更具文采。

1. 使用what引导的主语从句。

[例句]（2014·浙江高考）What we need most are popular science books. 我们最需要的是科普读物。

[仿写]She wants a portable laptop. 

                                                                                    

2. 使用it作形式主语，that引导的主语从句。

[例句]（2016·天津高考）It’s proved that although we are different in many ways, we can also become good friends. 事实证明，虽然我们在许多方面不同，但我们也可以成为好朋友。

[仿写]据报道我们国家又发射了一艘宇宙飞船。

                                                                                       

3. 使用that引导的宾语从句。

[例句]（2015·陕西高考）I’m sure that I can perfectly live up to your expectations. 我相信我能完全符合你的期望。

[仿写]我相信这对你来说将是一次难忘的经历。

                                                                                               

4. 使用if引导的宾语从句。

[例句]（2015·重庆高考）I am wondering if you could tell me more about this activity. 我想知道你能否告诉我有关这个活动的更多的信息。  

[仿写]我想知道你是否愿意和我一起去。

                                                                                   

5. 使用why引导的表语从句。

[例句]（2014·浙江高考）That is why I recommend another category of books: literary books. 那就是为什么我推荐另一类书籍：文学书籍。  

[仿写]那就是为什么她喜欢唱英文歌的原因。

                                                                                

6. 使用that引导的同位语从句There is no doubt that...

[例句]（2013·四川高考）There is no doubt that a healthy everyday habit helps to build up our body. 毫无疑问，健康的日常习惯有助于增强我们的体质。

[仿写]毫无疑问，她是我们班上最优秀的学生。

                                                                                        

7. 使用which引导的非限制性定语从句。

[例句]（2017·全国卷Ⅰ）At first, please read some materials about poetry of the Tang Dynasty, which plays an extremely significant role in our literature. 首先，请阅读一些有关唐代诗歌的资料，这些资料在我们的文学中有着极其重要的作用。

[仿写]在我们的日常生活中，我们对某件事会有自己的不同于他人的观点。

In our daily life, we will have our own point of view,                               .

8. 使用as引导的非限制性定语从句As we all know。

[例句]（2015·全国卷Ⅱ）As we all know, besides tasty dumplings, what elderly people in the nursing home also need is warmth and care. 众所周知，除了美味的饺子，敬老院里的老人同样需要的是温暖和关心。

[仿写]众所周知，书籍是人类进步的阶梯。

                                                                                  

9. 使用if引导的状语从句。

[例句]（2017·全国卷Ⅲ）If you are interested in it, you can visit the school website to sign up. 如果你对它感兴趣，你可以访问学校网站报名。

[仿写]如果你对它感兴趣，让我知道我会给你发送更多的信息。

                                                                                      

10. 使用so that引导的目的状语从句。

[例句]（2016·全国卷Ⅲ）We can set out early so that we will have more time to read and select books.我们可以早点出发，以便有更多的时间阅读和挑选书籍。

[仿写]我们努力学习是为了我们能有一个美好的未来。

                                                                                  

 

方法二：使用非谓语动词使句子简洁高档。

11. 使用非谓语动词之V-ing形式作主语。

[例句]（2017·天津高考）Practising my oral English is also becoming my schedule. 练习口语也成了我的日程安排。 

[仿写]养成良好的习惯也是很重要的。

                                                                                             

12. 用动词不定式作目的状语。

[例句]（2013·江西高考）In order to encourage the students to take outdoor exercise, our school organized a mountain-climbing on April,10. 为了鼓励学生参加户外运动，我们学校在4月10日组织了一次登山运动。 

[仿写]为了有好的表现，我已做了很多准备工作。

                                                                                      

13. 用过去分词作状语。

[例句]Seen from the space, the earth looks like a water planet. 从太空上看，地球看起来像一个水的星球。

[仿写]从山顶上看，我们学校看起来像一个漂亮的花园。

                                                                     

 

方法三：巧用特殊句式（倒装、强调句、感叹句等）增强句子的表现力。

14. 用Only 开头的倒装句。

They can grow up to be independent and become truly successful only in this way.

                                                                                   

15. 用not only… but also连接两个句子，前句用倒装。

[例句]（2015·浙江高考）By doing so, not only can I share good ideas with others but also I can learn to express myself clearly. 通过这样做，我不仅能与他人分享好的想法，而且我可以学会清楚地表达自己。

[仿写]她不仅喜欢语文，而且喜欢英语。

Not only                                                                            

16.用It is/was… that…强调句。

[例句]It is human activity that has caused this global warming. 正是人类活动造成了全球变暖。

[仿写] The brave boy saved his sister last week.

                                                                                    

17.使用感叹句。

[例句]What an interesting story it is! 多么有趣的故事啊！ 

[仿写]She is a clever girl.

                                                                                     

 

方法四：恰当引用名言或谚语。

[例句]18.（2015·重庆高考）As an old saying goes, living without a clear and achievable aim is like sailing without a compass.正如古老的谚语所说，生活没有清晰可达成的目标，犹如航海没有指南针。 

[仿写]正如名言所说：“有志者事竟成。”

                                                                                    

 

三、找出以下满分作文中使用的高级英语句式。

（2017年全国卷Ⅱ）假定你是李华，想邀请外教Henry一起参观中国剪纸（paper-cutting）艺术展。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：1. 展览时间、地点；2. 展览内容。

注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

 

Dear Henry,

I’m Li Hua, the leader of the paper-cutting club in our school. Last time you told me (that) you looked forward to learning more about traditional Chinese culture. Now I’m glad to tell you(that) there will be a Chinese paper-cutting exhibition held by our school. I sincerely hope (that) you can set aside some time for the art feast.

The exhibition, the theme of which is “beauty of China”, will take place in the school hall from 2 to 5 on the afternoon of June 21. Not only will our club’s works be displayed, but we also have a valuable set of paper-cutting created by a famous artist of this field. Besides, there will be a lot of useful and interesting activities, from which you can have a clearer picture of Chinese culture.

I would appreciate it if you accept my invitation. I'm sure (that) it can leave a wonderful impression on you! I’m looking forward to your reply.

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

小结：本文使用的高级英语句式有：                                               

                                                                              

 

参考答案

一、

1．宾语从句  2．定语从句   3．表语从句   4．主语从句  5．条件状语从句

6．非谓语动词之V-ing形式   7．only引导的倒装句   8．强调句  9．感叹句

10．非谓语动词之过去分词

二、

1. What she wants is a portable laptop.  

2. It is reported that our country has sent another spaceship.

3. I’m sure that it will be an unforgettable experience for you.

4. I wonder if you’d like to go with me.

5. That is why she likes singing English songs.  

6. There is no doubt that she is the best/ most excellent student in our class.

7. which is different from others

8. As we all know/ As is known to all, books are the ladder of human progress.

9. If you are interested in it, let me know and I’ll send you more information.

10. We study hard so that we can have a good future.

11. Developing a good habit is also of importance.

12. In order to have a good performance, I have made a lot of preparations for it.

13. Seen from the top of the hill, our school looks like a beautiful garden.

14. Only in this way can they grow up to be independent and become truly successful.

15. Not only does she like Chinese, but also she likes English.

16. It was the brave boy that saved his sister last week.

17. What a clever girl she is!/ How clever the girl is!

18. As a famous saying goes, “ Where there’s a will, there’s a way.”

三、

Dear Henry,

I’m Li Hua, the leader of the paper-cutting club in our school. Last time you told me［1］(that) you looked forward to ［2］learning more about traditional Chinese culture. Now I’m glad［3］to tell you［4］(that) there will be a Chinese paper-cutting exhibition［5］held by our school. I sincerely hope［6］(that) you can set aside some time for the art feast.

The exhibition,［7］the theme of which is “beauty of China”, will take place in the school hall from 2 to 5 on the afternoon of June 21.［8］Not only will our club’s works be displayed,but we also have a valuable set of paper-cutting［9］created by a famous artist of this field. Besides, there will be a lot of useful and interesting activities,［10］from which you can have a clearer picture of Chinese culture.

I would appreciate it［11］if you accept my invitation. I'm sure［12］(that) it can leave a wonderful impression on you! I’m looking forward to your reply.

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

解析：［1］［4］［6］［12］使用了that引导的宾语从句；［7］［10］使用了“介词+关系代词”引导的非限制性定语从句；［11］使用了if引导的条件状语从句；［2］使用了非谓语动词之V-ing形式作宾语，［3］使用了非谓语动词之动词不定式作宾语，［5］［9］使用了非谓语动词之过去分词作后置定语；［8］使用了not only…but(also)引导的倒装句。

 

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