要提高读后续写的语言表达能力，除了掌握读后续写常用的一些词语外，在平时的学习中还要注意积累一些常用句式，并背诵、默写、仿写，最后做到运用自如。今天就给大家介绍几种提分句式。

一、提分句式　无灵主语句，写情更细腻

在英美人的思维中，往往更注意客观事物和现象对人的作用和影响，反映在语言表达上就是经常用无生命名词作主语。无灵主语句的使用可以有效地提升作文的档次。

句型公式1：A wave of/A sense of...＋情感名词＋有灵动词＋sb

普通：I felt regretful when I heard the bad news.(以人作主语)

升级1：A wave of regret swept over me as I heard the bad news.

当我听到那个坏消息时，一股悔恨的浪潮席卷了我。

升级2：A strong sense of regret took hold of me the moment I heard the bad news.

当我听到那个坏消息时，一种强烈的悔恨之情控制了我。

句型公式2：身体部位的名词/“音、容、笑”的名词＋有灵动词(短语)

普通：She felt very delighted when I gave her the present.

升级：Her face brightened when I gave her the present.

我给她礼物时，她的脸上焕发出了光彩。

句型公式3：情感名词＋有灵动词＋sb(使某人不能做某事)

(1)情感名词＋deprived/robbed sb of sth(使某人丧失……的能力)

普通：I was too astonished to speak anything.

升级：Astonishment deprived me of my power of speech.惊讶使我说不出话来。

(2)情感名词＋prevented sb from doing sth(使某人无法做某事)

普通：He was too afraid to move.

升级：A strong wave of fear prevented him from moving.

强烈的恐惧感使他无法动弹。

(3)words等名词＋failed sb(某人无法做某事)

普通：I was speechless when I tried to express my heartfelt thanks.

升级：Words failed me when I tried to express my heartfelt gratitude.

当我试图表达我衷心的感谢时，我说不出话来。

二、提分句式　形容词(短语)作状语，描写更生动

句型公式：①形容词(短语)，主＋谓……

②主＋谓……，形容词(短语)

形容词(短语)作状语可位于句首、句末或句中。其主要功能是表达人物做某个动作的原因、结果或者伴随状态，可以增强感染力，使描述更生动形象。

1.表原因

Afraid of hearing the other name，I lowered my head and thought to myself.

我害怕听到另一个名字，我低下头想了想。

Eager to see the sunrise，they got up at four.

他们渴望看日出，4点钟就起床了。

2.表结果

After the long journey，he finally got home，tired out/worn out/exhausted.

经过长途跋涉，他终于回到了家，累的精疲力尽。

Jack came back home from the disaster area，safe and sound.

杰克从灾区安然无恙地回到家中。

3.表伴随

Deep in thought，Mary sat still against the door.

玛丽陷入沉思，静静地坐在门口。

Lost in the forest，Mary lay under a tree，full of fear and despair.

玛丽迷失在森林里，躺在树下，充满了恐惧和绝望。

三、提分句式　非谓语动词作状语，表达更简洁

非谓语动词doing，having done和done作状语时，主要表示原因、结果或伴随情况。doing/having done形式所表达的动作与主语之间构成主动关系，done 则与主语构成被动关系。用非谓语动词把同时发生或先后发生的两个动作连接起来，这样句子就不会显得单调，每个动作也能更紧密地衔接在一起。

句型公式1：主语＋did sth，doing...或者

Doing...，主语＋did sth

分析：两个动作同时发生，而且主语都一样，就可以用分词作状语，doing表示主动。

We talked for a while，recalling the journey I embarked on and the doubts I overcame.

我们聊了一会儿，回忆起我开始的旅程和我克服的疑虑。

句型公式2：主语＋did sth，done...或者 Done...，主语＋did sth

分析：done与逻辑主语是被动关系。

Dominated by an overwhelming sense of excitement and pride at his words，I simply stood there dumbfounded.

我对他的话感到了一种强烈的兴奋和自豪，但我只是目瞪口呆地站在那里。

The young man came into the police station，surrounded by a group of journalists.

这个年轻人在一群记者的包围下走进了警察局。

Immersed in a strong sense of fear，she could not say a word.

她沉浸在一种强烈的恐惧感中，一句话也说不出来。

句型公式3：Having done sth，sb did sth

分析：如果想强调同一个主语一个动作做完之后又做了另一个动作，就可以把先发生的用having done的形式来表示。

Having walked for quite a long time，she found herself lost.

＝After she walked for quite a long time，she found herself lost.

走了很长时间后，她发现自己迷路了。

四、提分句式　独立主格与with复合结构，句式更灵活

非谓语动词作状语时，其逻辑主语须与主句主语保持一致。若不一致，非谓语动词形式须另带主语，从而构成复合结构的形式作状语，这种结构称为独立主格结构。独立主格结构，一般用逗号与主句分开，其作用相当于一个状语从句或并列句，常用来表示时间、原因、条件或伴随情况等。独立主格经常可以和with复合结构互换。

句型公式：①独立主格结构：名词/代词＋非谓语动词(­ing形式、­ed形式或不定式)、形容词、副词或介词短语。

②with复合结构：with＋名词/代词＋非谓语动词(­ing形式、­ed形式或不定式)、形容词、副词或介词短语。

As I entered，he looked up from his desk，(with)a warm smile spreading across his face.

我进去的时候，他从桌子上抬起头来，脸上露出了温暖的微笑。

Her father was lying on his back，(with) his dog trapped under the truck.

她的父亲仰面躺着，他的狗被困在卡车下面。

五、提分句式　运用倒装句，句子更亮眼

倒装句的使用丰富了语言表达，让句式更加多样。因此，写作中适当用一些倒装句式会使文章的表达更生动、有力、让阅卷老师眼前一亮。

部分倒装1：So＋adj./adv.＋be动词/助动词＋主语...that...　如此……以至于……

During the exam，so nervous was I that my mind went blank.

考试中我如此紧张以至于大脑一片空白。

In the race，so quickly did he run that no one could catch up with him.

在比赛中，他跑得太快了，没有人能赶上他。

部分倒装2：n./adj./adv.＋as/though＋主语＋谓语，主句　“尽管/虽然……”

Disappointed as/though I was，I still managed a weak smile on my face.

虽然我很失望，我依然挤出一丝微笑。

部分倒装3：Only＋状语/状语从句＋助动词/情态动词/be动词＋主语＋其他　“只有……”

Only by daring to try can we make a breakthrough.

只有敢于尝试，我们才能取得突破。

I encouraged David who was at a loss，“Do keep in mind that only by possessing a good state of mind can you attain success.”

我鼓励不知所措的大卫：“务必记住只有拥有良好的心态你才能获得成功。”

部分倒装4：Not until＋状语/状语从句＋助动词＋主语...

Not until he had failed in the job interview did he realize how important confidence was.

直到他面试失败，他才意识到自信是多么重要。

部分倒装5：Hardly had sb done...when.../No sooner had sb done...than...　一……就……

No sooner had he realized his mistake than he apologized to his friend.

他一意识到自己的错误就向朋友道歉。

全部倒装6：Here/There/Out/In/Up/down/away/Now/Then...＋谓语(表示运动的不及物动词)＋主语

Following the roar，out rushed a tiger from among the bushes.

一声吼叫，呼地从丛林中窜出一只老虎。

全部倒装7：介词短语＋谓语(不及物动词，如lie，stand，sit，exist，stretch，come)或系动词be＋主语(名词)

In the doorway stood a man with a hammer.

门口站着一个拿锤子的人。

全部倒装8：分词短语＋be＋主语(名词)

Lying on the floor was a boy aged about 17.

躺在地板上的是一个约17岁的男孩。

1.家人与亲情

(1)It was this unique experience that made them obtain the pleasure of returning love to their mother.

正是这种独特的经历让他们收获了回报他们对母亲的爱的乐趣。

(2)It was with his father’s words that he realized family matters the most.　正是父亲的一席话才让他意识到了家人才是世界上最重要的。

(3)It was Henry’s kindness that made me feel the warmth of our family. I will treasure it with all my heart.

正是亨利的善良让我感受到了我们家庭的温暖。我会用心珍惜它的。

(4)Only then did I realize that we should never take love for granted.

直到那时我才意识到我们不应该把爱视为理所当然。

(5)The warm golden sunlight, flooding in through the window，together with love between my family, warmed us up.(比喻)

透过窗户的温暖的金色阳光，和我们家人之间的爱，温暖了我们。

2.友谊与友情

(1)With laughter lingering in the room, their sincere friendship blossomed in the summer like a flower that never fades.(比喻)

笑声回荡在房间里，他们真挚的友谊之花盛开在这个夏季，永不凋败。

(2)Friendship is like the light of fireflies.The darker it is, the brighter the light will be.(比喻)

友谊就像萤火虫的光。天越黑，光就会越亮。

(3)As the famous saying goes，“Without friends, the world would become wilderness.”

正如名言所说，“没有朋友，世界将变得荒芜。”

(4)If we really value our friends and friendship, always cherish their presence and show willingness to develop and maintain the relationship.

如果我们真的珍惜我们的朋友和友谊，就永远珍惜他们的存在，并愿意培养和维持这种关系。

3.做人与做事

(1)It was the first time that I had truly realized the meaning of patience.

这是我第一次真正意识到耐心的意义。

(2)I knew for sure that every time I lost patience in the future I would remember my grandfather’s words.

我当然知道，将来每当我失去耐心时，我就会记起祖父的话。

(3) What happened today made me realize that forgiveness is a kind of virtue.

今天发生的事情让我意识到宽恕是一种美德。

(4)It's never too late to learn. Each people has the right to accept more challenges and make more tries.

学习永远为时不晚。每个人都应该并且有权利去接受更多的挑战，做更多的尝试。

4.个人经历

(1)It was that accident that changed me, giving me an entirely new life.

就是这个意外改变了我，给了我全新的生活。

(2)A sweet peace flooded into me, which made me hopeful again.(比喻)

一种甜蜜的平静涌进心中，使我又充满了希望。

(3)Feeling fortunate, I made up my mind to cherish life and not to try such adventure again.  我庆幸之余决定珍惜生命，不再冒这样的险。

5.逐梦人生

(1)As the famous saying goes，“Each man is the architect of his own fate.”　正如名言所说，“每个人都是自己命运的建筑师。”

(2)As the famous saying goes，“ The world makes way for the dreamer.”

正如名言所说，“世界总会给有梦想的人开路。”

(3)Helping others to realize their dreams gave me more pleasure.

帮助别人实现他们的梦想让我感觉更快乐。

(4)As long as you have a dream，just go for it, and never give it up easily. Your dream might not come true in one or two days, but it will someday.

只要你有梦想，就去追求，不要轻易放弃。你的梦想可能不会在一两天内实现，但总有一天会实现的。

(5)It's never too late to go for your dream. As long as you grasp every opportunity and take full advantage of it, you will stand a chance to realize your dreams.

梦永远不晚。只要你抓住机会，充分利用机会，你就有机会实现梦想。2025高考英语答题技巧+押题卷（AI科技、哪吒2、甲亢哥时文阅读………）

6.助人为乐

(1)He held the coins tightly，tears rolling down without control. It is love that makes the world go around，which Lee felt deep in his little heart.

他紧紧地握着硬币，眼泪不由自主地流了下来。 正是爱让世界转动，李在他小小的心里深深地感受到了这一点。

(2)I thought to myself that I would spare no effort to help more people in the future to make our world more beautiful and warmer.

我想我将竭尽全力在未来帮助更多的人，使世界更美丽更温暖。

(3)This kind act has a lasting influence on me. I always give others a helping hand if possible.

这种善行对我产生了持久的影响。我总是尽可能地帮助别人。

(4)It dawned（破晓，意识到） on me that a moment of kindness could mean so much to another, and that a simple act could make the world so much better.

我恍然大悟，那一刻的善良对另一个人来说意义重大，而一个简单的行为可以使世界变得如此美好。

(5)Sometimes, a small act of kindness may be powerful enough to make a huge difference.

有时候小小的善行，可能足以带来巨大的改变

7.社会温情

(1)It was their love and support that saw me through different odds all these years. 

这么多年以来，是他们的爱与支持陪伴着我度过了艰难的时光。

(2)It was on that day that I came to know a truth—a small act of kindness can make a big difference.

正是在那一天，我领悟到了一个道理——小小善举可以带来大不同。

(3)With one small gesture, you may not only spread love, but also positively influence others’ lives.　通过小善举，你不仅能传递爱，还能积极地影响他人的生活。

8.良好的人际关系

(1)It was the special experience that made me realize forgiving is an important virtue. 

正是这次特别的经历使我意识到宽恕是一种重要的美德。

(2)It was this experience that changed my attitude towards Henry and our friendship has become more harmonious since then. 

正是这段经历改变了我对亨利的态度，从此我们的关系变得更加和谐。

(3)After all these years，that experience has always helped me remember the lesson：Be a little less judgmental and a bit more understanding toward others.

这么多年过去了，这段经历总是帮我记住这个教训：少评头论足，多理解他人。

常用名言警句

1. Actions speak louder than words. 事实胜于雄辩。

2. A friend in need is a friend indeed. 患难朋友才是真朋友。

3. A good beginning is half done. 良好的开端是成功的一半。

4. Where there is a will, there is a way. 有志者事竟成。

5. All roads lead to Rome. 条条大道通罗马。

6. Easier said than done. 说起来容易,做起来难。

7. Easy come, easy go. 来得快,去得快。

8. Every man has his weak side. 人人都有缺点。

9. Failure is the mother of success. 失败是成功之母。

10. Think twice before you do. 三思而后行。

11. Nothing in the world is difficult if you set your mind to it. 世上无难事,只怕有心人。

12. A life without a friend is a life without a sun. 人若无友,就如同生命中没有太阳。

13. All things are difficult before they are easy. 万事开头难。

14. Always prepare for a rainy day. 未雨绸缪。

15. As you sow, so shall you reap. 种瓜得瓜,种豆得豆。

16. I might say that success is won by three things: first, effort; second, more effort; third, still more effort. 成功要靠三件事才能赢得:努力,努力,再努力。

17. Don’t put off till tomorrow what should be done today. 有事莫推明天。

18. Practice makes perfect.熟能生巧。

19. Bad news has wings. 好事不出门,坏事传千里。

20. Honesty is the best policy. 做人以诚信为本。

21. You have to believe in yourself. That’s the secret of success. 你必须相信自己,这是成功的关键。

22.Don’t judge a man by his looks. 不可以貌取人。

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