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活用高分亮点词替换法,高考写作23+!

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在高考英语作文的评分标准里,一直有叫做“应用词汇数量”的一项,意在考查考生对英语词汇的掌握。

唯有用词尽量多样化,避免重复使用同一单词或短语,并尽量使用“高级词汇”,才能在这一项评分标准中得到高分。

下面我们先来看看使用高分词的四大原则。

:晚词优先

老师偏爱“学得晚”的单词,因为使用学得比较晚的单词,可以体现一个人“学以致用”的意识。如果一个意思既可以用初中单词来表达,又可以用高二、高三单词来表达,那尽量选择高二、高三的单词,如:

adj.困难的

简单词:difficult

高分亮点词:challenging 有挑战性的

adj.重要的

简单词:important

高分亮点词:vital 至关重要的;essential 必不可少的;significant 有重要意义的;

adj.美丽的

简单词:beautiful

高分亮点词:appealing动人的;attractive 吸引人的;charming迷人的;fascinating 迷人的

注:这五个词既能修饰人,又能修饰物,非常好用,务必记熟!

原则二:短语优先

在阅卷老师看来,活用短语是一个考生能力的体现。因此,我们可以掌握一些将某些常见单词转化为短语的用法,如:

v. 参加

简单词:join

高分亮点词:take part in

v. 使用

简单词:use

高分亮点词:make good use of

v. 拜访

简单词:visit

高分亮点词:pay a visit to

最常见的换词手段:形容词=of+同根名词

三:“具体化”单词优先

请先对比以下几组句子:

例句1: I go to school everyday.

例句2: I ride to school everyday.

在课堂上,老师经常以这两个句子为例,讲解“具体化”的重要性。很多同学都能感觉到例句2要比例句1好。

究其原因,是例句2中的ride比例句1中的go更加具体:go只表达了“去”的意思,而ride不但表达出“去”的意思,还能表达出具体的交通方式。也就是说,例句2表达的信息量比例句1更加丰富。

再如:

例句3: Mr Wang is a good teacher.

例句4: Mr Wang is a kind, patient and knowledgeable teacher.

例句3只表达出Mr Wang是一个“好”老师,而到底“好”在哪些方面,却没有具体说清楚;例句4则清楚地告诉读者,Mr Wang好在三个方面:和蔼(kind)、耐心(patient)以及知识丰富(knowledgeable)。

因此,我们必须学会换用更为具体的单词表达我们的思想,如:

v. 学习

简单词:learn

高分亮点词:research研究;pick up偶然学到,顺便学到,轻松学到;master掌握

n. 好老师

简单词:a good teacher

高分亮点词:a kind, patient and knowledgeable English teacher一个善良、耐心、博学的老师。

当然,除了替换某些表意抽象的单词,我们还可以通过增加细节成分,使表达更为具体,如,例句2可以加上同伴、心情等信息,进一步改写成:

例句5: I,together with Tom and Jerry, rode to the Zhongshan park yesterday,feeling rather excited.

同样的,例句4也可以加上一个定语从句,写出Mr Wang到底擅长哪些事情,如:

例句6: Mr Wang is a kind, patient and knowledgeable teacher who knows how to enlighten us students.

可以看到,例句5和例句6两个句子采用“具体化”的手段,将原本毫无生气的句子顿时变得生动形象了。

综上所述,想让你的表达“具体化”,一共有两种常用方法,其一,是换掉某些表意不明确的单词,换上表意更加明确具体的单词;其二,是在句中适当增加细节成分。

“具体化”的好处,是让句子的含义更加丰富,让读者更容易由句子展开丰富的联想,随着作者一起经历、一起思考、一起感动。在平时的学习、训练中,与其生硬地使用超纲词汇,不如好好熟悉大纲单词,用好“具体化”的两种方法,为你的作文增光添彩。

事实上,“具体化”在汉语写作中也有同样的体现。比如,要表达“惜别”的感情,光说“再见”是不够的,应该像诗人那样,用具体化的细节带动感情,写出梦幻般的文字:“让我与你握别/再轻轻抽出我的手/ 知道思念从此生根/ 浮云白日/ 山川庄严温柔...”

这就是“具体化”的作用,你体会到了吗?

原则四:大纲词

在高中英语中,我们已经涉及到了词根词缀的知识。运用这些知识,可以将很多高中词汇衍生为四六级词汇甚至托福、雅思词汇。如果能够熟练使用一两个这种词汇,你的作文肯定能让阅卷老师眼前一亮!

举例如下:

adv. 当然地

简单词:certainly

高分亮点词:obviously 明显地;undoubtedly 毫无疑问地;evidently显然地;

adj. 不开心的

简单词:sad

高分亮点词:discouraged气馁的;depressed沮丧的;downhearted垂头丧气的;low-spirited意志消沉的;

我们为大家整理了20组阅卷老师看了就想给高分的好词、句子替换练习题和写作替换练习题。大家一定要学会使用哦~

高分亮点词汇

Vol.1

首先

常见简单词:first ,firstly

高分亮点词:first of all, to start with, to begin with, in the first place

例:To start with, doing a part-time job is my dream and I intend to work as a salesman because not only can I earn money by myself, but also it will broaden my horizons.

首先,做兼职是我们的梦想,同时,我打算做一个销售人员是因为不仅可以养活自己,还能扩展眼界。

Vol.2

其次

常见简单词:second,secondly

高分亮点词:in addition, then, next, in the second place

例:In addition, it is a choice to visit some famous scenic spots such as Mount Tai during the vacation.

其次,它是一次机会可以在假期中参观一些名胜古迹,如泰山。

Vol.3

再次

常见简单词:third,thirdly

高分亮点词:what is more, in the third place

例:What is more, doing voluntary work, I think, will make a great contribution to the society, which is able to enrich my life.

再次,我认为做志愿者工作,可以丰富自己的人生,也是对社会的贡献。

Vol.4

最后

常见简单词:finally,at last

高分亮点词:in conclusion, in the end, last but not least

例:In conclusion,let's work together to save energy and protect our natural environment, including animals, trees, flowers and grass.

最后,让我们齐心协力去节约能源,保护我们的自然环境,保护动物,树木,花草。

Vol.5

解释

常见简单词:explain

高分亮点词:account for

例:There exist two reasons, which may account for the difference.

这里有两点原因可以解释这个差异。

Vol.6

打算

常见简单词:plan

高分亮点词:intend,mean

例:I intend to join in a Dragon Boat Training Camp.

我打算参加一个龙舟训练营。

Vol.7

变成

常见简单词:become

高分亮点词:turn into,change into

例:Then they started shouting and yelling, and it turned into a horrible quarrel.

然后他们开始喊叫,最终变成了一场可怕的争吵。

Vol.8

告诉

常见简单词:tell

高分亮点词:share with

例:I'm writing to share with you some details.

我现在给你写信来告诉你一些细节。

Vol.9

对……感到惊讶

常见简单词:be surprised at

高分亮点词:be amazed at

例:I'm amazed at the progress you've made.

我对你取得的进步感到惊讶。

Vol.10

集合

常见简单词:meet

高分亮点词:gather

例:We'll gather at the Students' Club at 8 p.m. this Friday.

这周五的下午八点,我们将在学校俱乐部集合。

Vol.11

各种各样的

常见简单词:different kinds of

高分亮点词:a wide variety / range of

例:We have a wider range of choices such as travelling and visiting our relatives or friends.

我们有更多的选择,像旅行,拜访亲朋好友。

Vol.12

帮忙

常见简单词:help

高分亮点词:do sb. a favor, give sb. a hand, help sb. out

例:I'd like you to do me a favor.

我想要你帮个忙。

Vol.13

确信

常见简单词:I'm sure / certain that

高分亮点词:I am convinced that

例:I am pretty convinced that a wise choice makes perfect.

我确信一个明智的选择会促成完美的结果。

Vol.14

考虑

常见简单词:consider

高分亮点词:think over, give sth. careful / full / serious consideration,take account of, take... into account / consideration

例:We would have to give careful consideration to environmental issues.

我们必须要认真考虑环境问题。

Vol.15

以……自豪

常见简单词:be proud of

高分亮点词:take pride in

例:He took pride in having contributed to the world.

他以对世界的贡献自豪。

Vol.16

对……感兴趣

常见简单词:be interested in

高分亮点词:have an interest in

例:The girl has a great interest in sport and has been taking badminton classes twice a week over the last three years.

这个女孩对体育感兴趣,并且在过去的三年里,每周都会参加两次羽毛球课。

Vol.17

认为/相信

常见简单词:think, believe

高分亮点词:consider, assume that, maintain, argue that

例:Some argue that humans and machines can coexist as long as they work in teams.

一些人认为,只要人类和机器以团队的方式工作,它们就可以共存。

Vol.18

解决

常见简单词:solve

高分亮点词:resolve, deal with, cope with, settle, work out

例:We may have various ways to deal with such a situation.

我们可以有很多种方式来处理这种情况。

Vol.19

努力

常见简单词:work hard

高分亮点词:spare no effort

例:Let's start fight now and spare no effort to do a little bit every day, every hour, and every minute!

让我们开始奋斗,每天,每小时,每一分钟都努力一点。

Vol.20

获得

常见简单词:get

高分亮点词:gain, acquire, obtain, achieve, attain

例1:To gain a bright future, you might have to work hard.

为了获得一个光明的未来,你应该要努力学习。

例2:No pians no gains.

一分耕耘,一分收获。

句子替换练习

请用高级词汇替换下列句子中的加粗部分:

1.(2017·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达) So, please spend some time taking a brief look at the history of the Tang Dynasty, which will help you prepare for your class.

替换词:Therefore; make preparations for

2.(2017·全国卷Ⅱ书面表达)The craftsmen will show visitors how to cut paper into different shapes on the spot.

替换词:various/a range of

3.(2016·北京高考书面表达) Our class thought of the idea to make better use of used materials.

替换词:came up with

4.(2016·四川高考书面表达)The reasons are the following.

替换词:As follows

5.(2015·湖南高考书面表达)At the same time, I decided to study harder rather than waste precious time on those useless things ...

替换词:made up my mind

6. As high school students, we should be neatly dressed when at school.

替换词:are supposed to

7. There's no harm in your staying up late sometimes.

替换词:occasionally/once in a while

8. The teacher directed the gifted students towards the more difficult courses.

替换词:challenging

9. So far as I know, every one of them wants to be a model student.

替换词:intends to

写作提升练习

假定你是中学生李华,家住泉州。你的英国笔友Jason来信谈到了他的家乡伦敦,并希望了解你的家乡泉州的情况。请你用英文写一封回信。

回信必须包括以下内容:

1.自然情况:地理位置优越、气候风景宜人等;

2.发展成就:经济发展迅速、城市高楼林立等;

3.存在问题:交通拥堵现象、空气污染问题等;

4.对泉州发展的看法:内容由考生自己拟定。

注意:

1.词数100左右;

2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

参考词汇:

高层建筑 high­rise building

 

 

 

【考生作文】

Dear Jason,

I'm ①very happy to hear from you and know about your beautiful home city London. Now I'd like to tell you something about my hometown Quanzhou.Quanzhou is a beautiful place for people to live in. Its economy has been developing ②fast during the past ten years. New bridges and roads have been ③built, high­rise buildings standing in many parts of the city.④More and more schools and hospitals are ⑤useful for the native people. It is developing into a modern and ⑥beautiful city. ⑦But there are still some problems, such as heavy traffic in rush hours and ⑧serious air pollution, which have a bad ⑨effect on people's daily life. ⑩I think Quanzhou should develop healthily and scientifically, so that we could have a better hometown in future.

Yours,

Li Hua

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【替换后作文】

Dear Jason,

I'm ①more than happy to hear from you and know about your beautiful home city London. Now I'd like to tell you something about my hometown Quanzhou.Quanzhou is a beautiful place for people to live in. Its economy has been developing ②rapidly during the past ten years. New bridges and roads have been ③set up, high­rise buildings standing in many parts of the city. ④An increasing number of schools and hospitals are ⑤available for the native people. It is developing into a modern and ⑥attractive/charming city. ⑦However, there are still some problems, such as heavy traffic in rush hours and ⑧severe air pollution, which have a bad ⑨influence/impact on people's daily life. ⑩In my opinion/As far as I am concerned, Quanzhou should develop healthily and scientifically, so that we could have a better hometown in future.

Yours,

Li Hua

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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